Sunday, August 12, 2007

 
cricket in the stairwell
calling to the EXIT sign
hieroglyphic moon



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# posted by Emily Veinglory @ 1:36 PM
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Cool Haiku!
# posted by Blogger Amy Ruttan : August 12, 2007 4:45 PM
 
Heh! Love "hieroglyphic moon"!
It's all relative isn't it? We all read different things in what we see.
# posted by Blogger Rhian / Crowwoman : August 12, 2007 4:58 PM
 
Nice one!
# posted by Blogger Laura Bacchi : August 12, 2007 5:45 PM
 
I'd love to know what sparked the idea behind this... it's very cool.
# posted by Blogger Susan Helene Gottfried : August 12, 2007 6:31 PM
 
I guess it might not technically be a haiku. But basically it is descriptive. That cricket is driving me crazy. I always say, be obscure and people will think you are deep ;) But I was wondering what life is like for a stairwell cricket, who is it calling to?
# posted by Blogger Emily Veinglory : August 12, 2007 6:39 PM
 
Very cool. I like it.
# posted by Blogger Ann : August 12, 2007 8:34 PM
 
I like it. A lot.

Where did heiroglyphic moon come from? Very cool.
# posted by Anonymous Nancy : August 13, 2007 4:44 AM
 
"hieroglyphic moon"

Awesome!
# posted by Anonymous gautami tripathy : August 13, 2007 5:35 AM
 
Very, very trixy, Emily. I have this little picture in mind now of this cricket standing in the stairwell doorway serenading his hieroglyphic moon and wondering why no one replies
# posted by Blogger Anne Douglas : August 13, 2007 6:27 AM
 
LOL! Poor deluded cricket. :D Awesome, Emily.
# posted by Blogger Robin L. Rotham : August 13, 2007 8:45 AM
 
This reminds me of the cricket that used to chirp in our furnace room. There must have been more than one - otherwise he lived forever. What a fascinating poem to come out of your stairwell cricket - "be obscure and people will think you are deep ;)"
Works for me!
# posted by Blogger julia : August 13, 2007 9:29 AM
 
You play cricket in stairwells in the Colonies?
# posted by Blogger MyQaeda : August 13, 2007 9:30 AM
 
Haiku!!! lol on the "hieroglyphic moon".
# posted by Blogger Lisa Andel : August 13, 2007 10:37 AM
 
I like, like most people, the pictureste of the "hieroglyphic moon"!!
Do you always do Haiku??
# posted by Blogger Jill : August 13, 2007 1:07 PM
 
Cool haiku!
# posted by Blogger Heather Harper : August 13, 2007 5:34 PM
 
Very interesting visual there. What phase is the hierglyphic moon in?
# posted by Anonymous Missy : August 13, 2007 7:45 PM
 
Missy's comment cracks me up!!
# posted by Blogger Rhian / Crowwoman : August 14, 2007 4:11 AM
 
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